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Happy Santa Smex, pixxers!


To: pixxers
From: potter


Title: Time's The Charm
Recipient's name: pixxers
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Yukimura/Sanada, Tezuka/Atobe
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created by Konomi Takeshi. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
Warnings: Lots of underage boysex? :D
Author's notes: Thanks to L for betaing. Uhh, enjoy?



"Time's The Charm" - Part 1: http://superlover.livejournal.com/874.html
"Time's The Charm" - Part 2: http://superlover.livejournal.com/1077.html

Comments

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flosspyromaniac
Dec. 8th, 2006 08:46 pm (UTC)
Oh my. I just loved the dynamics here. Particuarly between Tezuka and Atobe, but also Sanada and Yukimura.

I loved how it wasn't easy, that they made things more complicated. And I love a scheming Yukimura.

The e-mails were a lovely touch, particularly showing the deleted ones, and Atobe made me laugh there.

Definitely enjoyed.

~Floss
chaosmyth
Dec. 8th, 2006 09:13 pm (UTC)
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Asfjsfsjajsjsjdjdghajahkj Seme!Yukimura is hot. *___*

And Atobe/Tezuka Oh God Yes. Clearly I died and went to heaven.
I don't have the strenght to write a proper comment, right now. This feels like post-coital bliss, and I'm happily basking in the afterglow. ♥
threefrog
Dec. 8th, 2006 10:39 pm (UTC)
AtoTez!!! :D :D :D

♥ !!

Oh, Tezuka... :D :D :D

todaythesamesky
Dec. 8th, 2006 10:57 pm (UTC)
Oh. My. Goodness. I am blown away. I have always had difficulty understanding AtoTez but right now? Right now they feel sexy to me, and real, like the whole fic was sex and the ending was the ending and just... oh, my. I loved the e-mails and the awkwardness and the way the ending feels like winning. Brilliant. pixxers is a lucky lady.
reposoir
Dec. 8th, 2006 11:09 pm (UTC)
I admit that bottom!Sanada was my fav bit of this.

And the emails.

Definitely those too. :D :D :D
pixxers
Dec. 8th, 2006 11:46 pm (UTC)
Oh, god.

I checked the comm just before I left work because reposoir had being a stingy wench all day long and not posted today's fic and I was so hoping she'd post mine so I could stop dreaming about getting Niou haiku instead of a real fic. :D Anyway, I chewed off three of my fingernails waiting for it to print and I almost wrecked twice on the way home because I couldn't stop glancing over at the passenger seat to look at all those lovely sheets of paper.

Gah, where do I start? You hit all my happy buttons - uke Sanada, Atobe/Tezuka with no real distinction as to who possessed control. Uncertain Atobe and awkward, beautiful Tezuka - so calm and admirable but uncertain, as well.

Oishi - my lovely, lovely Oishi - such a good friend and sweet and polite and alksdfjsdlfksdj. Okay, I won't keysmash again - sorry about that.

The emails and failed sex and Tezuka's hot kisses and the triumph that they both felt. God, and the emails. And Yuushi! ♥

I can't say how much I loved this and how much I appreciate all the thought and care and time and talent that went into this story. I'd begun to despair ever seeing wonderfully written AtoTez ever again in a sea of bandwagon pillar pair.

Thank you so much. *hugs* I'll keep this forever ~ I think it's probably the best present I'll get all season. ♥ ♥ ♥

And don't think, not for one minute, that I didn't figure you out two sentences in.
kessie
Dec. 9th, 2006 12:27 am (UTC)
Oh my god. :-O That was brilliant!
cavechan
Dec. 9th, 2006 12:55 am (UTC)
That was a AWESOME fanfic. There were soooo many little lines in it that just had me SLAPPING MY KNEES because they were just, SO PERFECT. And SO TRUE. XD
iverin
Dec. 9th, 2006 01:15 am (UTC)
I love you, and I would gladly bear your children or something equally inappropriate of me to offer.

My OTP has never seen such grace, honesty, and realism, and I think I'm going to go die now because that was the most beautiful thing I have read in a very, very long time.

Thank you for reminding me why I will never, NEVER stop shipping that couple. Thank you.

/incoherence
hamburgerjack
Dec. 9th, 2006 03:27 am (UTC)
*is ded*

Oh, now that was wonderful.

It was very round to me and I like the explanations. This almost makes me like Tezuka. It really does. He got so close to human, well I just don't know about him now!

:3 Thank you for sharing.
serenia
Dec. 9th, 2006 03:45 am (UTC)
That was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I had to stop and go Christmas shopping halfway through it, but I was thinking about it the whole time!
I loved the awkwardness of their first attempt, and the ardour of their high-on-winning sex. Pix is lucky indeed!
worblehat
Dec. 9th, 2006 04:28 am (UTC)
Awww, that was really sweet. I like the touch with the e-mails, it was definitely fun to read. Sanada is so cute and I like the development between Atobe and Tezuka, how it's done. Nice!
alita_b_angel
Dec. 9th, 2006 05:05 am (UTC)
THE LAST LINE IS SO PERFECT I COULD DIE.

asdsfdjkafb.

*is not coherent at all*
wickedcherub
Dec. 9th, 2006 05:13 am (UTC)
There is not enough AtoTez in this world. This was so beautiful and meaningful I love it.
slinkiestumble
Dec. 9th, 2006 08:26 am (UTC)
Wow. Just wow. That was intense and powerful and so utterly awkward in that teenage boy way... damn. Such a wonderful piece. Oh yes.
nivell
Dec. 9th, 2006 08:38 am (UTC)
Oh god, so good, just so damn good. Possibly one of the best AtoTez fics out there.
akahannah
Dec. 9th, 2006 11:15 am (UTC)
You have absolutely sold me 100% on this pairing. I've always thought AtoTez had a lot of potential but I couldn't find a fic to really suit my tastes. This was just ... wow. I absolutely love your take on both Atobe and Tezuka and their interactions. You made two characters often portrayed in a very one-dimensional way into something so real, so full of life and joy. I can't even begin to guess who you are as I suck, but this was absolutely wonderful regardless. ♥
shikishi
Dec. 9th, 2006 12:14 pm (UTC)
Not a pairing I normally would stop for, but you did a fantastic job with the fic.

and the e-mails were a nifty touch.

They're all such dorks.
lechaco
Dec. 9th, 2006 06:47 pm (UTC)
ahh that was so good!! It was funny, hot, and the characterization was real (the awkwardness was cute XD). But what really stuck out was your analysis of Tezuka and Atobe's defensive vs offensive styles. omgg ♥!
prillalar
Dec. 9th, 2006 08:40 pm (UTC)
Tennis in fic is always such a treat! And I really like your analysis of Atobe and Tezuka's playing styles. I'll be thinking about that now.

Yay for awkward, abortive sex and yay for them getting it right in the end! :)
_profiterole_
Dec. 9th, 2006 10:41 pm (UTC)
Wow! It was wonderful, clever, witty and fucking hot! The tennis parts were almost as sexy as the sex parts, and the emails were an awesome addition. Congratulations for this beautifully written piece! ^__^
numisma
Dec. 10th, 2006 12:33 am (UTC)
I stayed up till past 4am reading a printout of this fic because it was so awesome. I'm pretty much an "I'll take any pairing so logn as it's written well" kind of gal, and this fic is probably the ultimate AtoTez fic for me. Yum. So much I could quote, but it would take forever. Nyah. Here, have an Atobe icon instead. You rock.
sarahofcroydon
Dec. 10th, 2006 01:54 am (UTC)
I absolutely LOVED this fic. YOU MADE ME UNDERSTAND TEZUKA. I was absolutely captivated the whole time. ^______^
takewing
Dec. 10th, 2006 03:03 am (UTC)
I can't get over how BEAUTIFULLY this was written. Very real, very beautiful descriptions and imagery, and also very real, very sexy boys. *___*

I loved their imperfection and their awkwardness and their cute emails and their tennis matches and I loved THEM and THANK YOU for reminding me how much I love AtoTez, even if I rarely if ever read it. ♥

Very, very well done.
happyaddict
Dec. 10th, 2006 01:53 pm (UTC)
@_@ That was brilliant... I love your writing style~~
aiwritingfic
Dec. 20th, 2006 02:53 am (UTC)
Oh my lord. Tezuka and Atobe have never been more perfect.

Whoever wrote this ... THANK YOU for writing such WONDERFUL AtoTez. <3
good_chaser
Dec. 31st, 2006 05:50 pm (UTC)
this is late but ... LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE the AtoZuka part! XDXDXD this fic offering something new about their relationship. that's iayg;if!!! *fails to comments coherently* XD
ehm, my point is: this is one great atozuka fic, thanks to the author ♥ ^___^
darkmage009
Dec. 27th, 2007 03:21 am (UTC)
Ah...excuse me...just wondering, is this fic not available any longer?
venivincere
Dec. 27th, 2007 03:52 am (UTC)
My old domain got wiped out during the Great Dreamhost Purge -- potter has the story posted in two parts in her fic journal here:

Part 1: http://superlover.livejournal.com/874.html
Part 2: http://superlover.livejournal.com/1077.html

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